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Run Away

I'm tearing myself apart today,
Telling myself that I'm okay.
Hiding myself under a smile,
Hoping that you will stay a while.

Well, I'm not fine,
I won't shine,
Today.

I love you so much, I'd run away,
Oh, wishing to see you every day.
Hoping that you will stay the night,
Hoping that you won't run away,
Don't run away, run away, today.

Clutching my chest, I feel this pain,
Trying to get rid of this old stain.
Hoping that these old scars'll fade,
Trying to hide that I'm afraid.

Well, I will fade,
I will shade,
My life.

I still love you so much, I'd run away,
Oh, wishing to see you every day.
Hoping that you will stay the night,
Hoping that you won't run away,
Please don't run away, run away, today.

Well, I'm not fine,
I won't shine,
I will fade,
I will shade,
I'm not 'kay,
You won't stay,
Today

You told me that you loved me so,
You told me that you won't ever let go,
You told me that you'll always be right by my side.
But that's some terrible lie.
Please don't run away, don't run away, run away.
'cos that's some some terrible lie.
Oh, don't run away.
©2008-2009 ~AitamiIkimo
:iconaitamiikimo:

Author's Comments

It's kind of a poem, but I'm making it a song... This is what I have so far and I have the tune all worked out in my head. X3

I reckon it kinda rhymes a little too much, but oh well. Please do tell me what you think of this.

**Edit**
Send me a note if you wanna hear this in tune I made up for it... >.> DON'T KILL ME FOR SUCH A YOUNG VOICE >.<

P.S. Thanks to ~Ninapett for the title.

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:iconimmortal-rain-soul:
:O
Pretty...
I ish lubbing up writing ^^

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"I'll wait on the corner once again, even though I know you'll never be there. I'll wait, because you're worth it, even if you can never meet me there."
:iconaitamiikimo:
Thanks. :)

I'm still not satisfied with my writing yet though. >.<

Which means a lot more is coming up. :)

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:iconimmortal-rain-soul:
YaYYY !!!
More for me to read ^^

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"I'll wait on the corner once again, even though I know you'll never be there. I'll wait, because you're worth it, even if you can never meet me there."
:iconmysticsteph:
Awesome, this could make a wonderfull song!! :+fav:

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Is love only an illusion?
I'm French so sorry if my English seems bad to some of you.And sorry if I don't understand right away.

SasukexNaruto:heart::heart:
NowakixHiroki:heart:
:iconmauve-avenger:
Awesome, man.

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Is a rhetorical question so if someone answers it?
:iconin-the-distance:
Yeah it definately sounds like a song and if it ever becomes one i wanna hear it!!!! the lyrics are pretty ^_^

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~ Art is the only way to run away without leaving home. ~
:iconaitamiikimo:
LOL. I sure hope I don't turn you to mush though. X3

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:iconaitamiikimo:
Thanks. =]

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