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Nightmares by *AitamiIkimo:iconAitamiIkimo:

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Nightmares

I look, I look down below me
The sun yawed and set slowly, illuminating the sky amber-scarlet
Stars begun to dance
Owls hooted songs to the moon

Warmth around me grew
As my eyes are lit from the sky's orb, moon
I hummed along with the birds' melody
And looked down a li'l more

Animals happily retreated
Rainbow-coloured moths fluttered around
As fireflies spun gleefully
Whilst I gave an ear-to-ear smile

Yes, happy I seemed indeed
But really
Inside I am scared
Terrified of my own nightmares

My own nightmares being myself
Myself hurting those who I love
Hurting even those who I dislike
Ripping everything down, one by one

My nightmare being me
A monster who cannot be stopped
A monster who cannot be helped
A monster who cannot free itself from misery

Everyone hates such a terrifying monster...
©2008-2010 *AitamiIkimo
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Author's Comments

You could say this is a li'l bit of me, or you could not. That's all up to you.

Please do tell me what you think of this.

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~varascus1323 Jun 3, 2008, 12:01:58 AM
*shudders* wow... I strangely go through this allot... almost everyday...
this one I can relate to allot

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You have lovely eyes, can I touch them?
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*AitamiIkimo Jun 3, 2008, 1:19:52 AM
Apparently, I write things that relate closely to life... >.>

Did you tell me that? LMAO.

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~santuary Jun 3, 2008, 1:50:15 AM
We can face it...
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~Philipinoguy Jun 3, 2008, 2:20:43 AM
you like reading people's minds, don't you?


i really like this poem, it has a melancholy feeling, which is a good thing, heavily describing the good and bad things of life :).

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*AitamiIkimo Jun 3, 2008, 2:48:15 AM
Lol, maybe slightly. eheheheh.

Thank-you. :)

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~Philipinoguy Jun 3, 2008, 3:25:48 AM
*wraps foil around his head*

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~varascus1323 Jun 3, 2008, 10:35:10 AM
yeah... i think i did XD

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You have lovely eyes, can I touch them?
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~Mauve-Avenger Jun 3, 2008, 10:39:24 AM
Your writing is really good. You always touch on a point relative to life... and that's what writing is all about. Words on a page can only create, never destroy, therefore you are an artist.

I don't know what any of that means, but hey, I really like your writing. Keep it up!

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